Take a look at the film before Wednesday, please. Remember that you have to finish your first version on Wednesday.
The phrases below are made by Mia Smith and her students in Gothenburg! Thanks!
STARS
Variation and vocabulary
Your language is varied.
You vary your language well.
Your vocabulary is very varied.
Your language felt very much alive.
You have a varied language and don’t repeat yourself.
Clarity and coherence
Your text has good flow.
It’s easy to understand your text.
The content of your text was clear with good details.
The content was very clear.
Your text has a clear line of argument.
There was a clear line of argument in your text, making it easy to understand.
Your text is coherent and clear.
You reason with good arguments to support your point.
Adaption
Your writing is well adapted to your theme.
You adapt your language to different genres.
You adapt your text to the receiver and situation.
Grammar and spelling
Good sentence structure and descriptions.
You write with good grammar.
WISHES
Variation and vocabulary
You could vary your vocabulary more.
You could use more difficult words and sentences.
Try to read more difficult text to learn how to write like that.
You need to expand your vocabulary.
Try to make your language come alive more.
Clarity and coherence
Your text could have better flow.
You could develop your reasoning more.
Try to make your text more coherent.
Next time you write a text, make sure it has a clear line of argument.
You can work with clarifying your text
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Adaption
You could adapt your language more to your theme.
You can think about adapting your text to the receiver and situation.
You should try to adapt the language to your genre.
You could adapt your language more to the purpose
Grammar and spelling
You can improve the grammar in your text.
You need to improve the sentence structure.
There are some spelling mistakes, read through your text once more to find them.
Think about what tense you use (verbs).
Sara
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